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plz tell me wat u think.

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:iconanimeman115:
thanx a lot 4 the fave and im glad u like it ^_^
:iconbalbi-balbi:
np. :D

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:iconwanderer-of-days:
The shading is exquisite.

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:iconanimeman115:
thank you very much. im glad you like it. ^_^
:iconlacelette:
Well, I love her face. Mainly because of her calm expression that exposed her as some sort of an aloof character. Her costume looks awesome and you're quite good with the cloth foldings. :love: Its also great how I could instantly tell that she's a samurai from her sword and costume. One question though, if the hilt of the sword is position diagonally that way, where is the rest of the blade?

Oh, and you did a great job with the shadings too but your outlines are...what I would say, unbalanced. It means that there are places where the outlines are bold and clear, which is good, but other places that are unclear and fading. This will make your character look slightly unbalanced. When you outline your characters, make sure that your lines are clear and consistent because the first thing viewers will notice when they see a picture, is the outline. If the outline is wobbly, the whole picture will look wobbly, if the outline is sketchy, then the whole picture looks sketchy. You should get what I mean.

Also, I noticed how her shoulders seem a bit off. Its too straight. When drawing shoulders, the trapezius must curve slightly downwards and then continue with the delt (short for deltoid) in a straight line. Here's a reference picture for you to understand better: [link] and [link]

Other than that, everything else looks fine to me. =D You don't have any problems with her arm and I really like your costume design. I bet thats your strength in drawing. Designs and expression. And one more question before I shut myself up: What is that girl's name? =)

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:iconfujiiro-doku-sama:
KICK ASS!!!!

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:iconanimeman115:
Thanks sooo much for ur feedback! yea the sword, i know that i didnt put it all the way through it was a quick drawing that i put together to see how her body and proportions looked to others LOL. once again thanks a lot for the feedback and i hope to hear more in the future! ^_^
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LOL thanks a lot!!! ^_^

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